This is a very engaging and entertaining novel. First I would like to start with the things I don’t like about it. Especially in the beginning the progress is very rushed and I had to piece things together in my head bc they were overlooked? Also there were very convenient things at the start that felicitated the plot. But aside from that and some otherthings that arent really worth complaining here about its more complaining in chapter things, this novel feels well crafted. We actually have a grey mc and we see and mc actually create his own faction which I have been looking for for a while. Now maybe a little cautioning for the future, I feel like we need some bigger subplots aside from building the faction give the mc some other motivations they feel a bit too one track and can get boring if continued for too long without mixing it up every now and then.
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Liked it!
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