The_Best_3329

Why the fuck not just tell the fucking truth that’s often the easiest thing

You can’t write drama author since you gotta lower the MCs IQ by 2000

Tbh it’s all nice but it feels so unnecessary sluggish bc of all the stupid reactions

This story really got quite a bit shorter since skipping all the fleur stuff

Hopefully this he doesn’t get together with her since imma skip this one read to many fanfics and I had enough of her

This feels way to forced that fox isn’t there

I dont like the shit interaction with her not to mention it’s done way to much

I really think this should be a bit slower show him Training his kids or something

Man it just got exiting and I caught up to the latest chaper 🥹

No I like to make clear especially for the author why I would find such a development unacceptable