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2024-09-02 09:29

I'm gonna be honest here. It feels a bit rushed. The MC has no regards for his own safety and just rushes into everything and yet somehow manages to get away with it despite being in a world of spies and suspicions. But that could just be me reading too many Naruto conspiracy fanfics. The MC just goes to Naruto to take a look at the sealed book. he wasn't discovered, Naruto never mentioned it to anyone, and the clone technique of a genin can flawlessness bypass ninjas on high alert. Iruka looked down on the MC so much that he forgot to write his name so he can be assigned to a class despite knowing he passed? That sounds stupid. And full of loopholes considering Iruka's character. And weren't class arrangements decided by hokage? why does iruka not report back to hiruzen but goes to Asuma instead? Loser student suddenly masters Fireball jutsu, no explanation where it came from and no one seems to care how the MC obtained it. The hokage seems like his intelligence has been lowered Alongside Kakashi's. MC has no combat experience yet easily kills a chunin while he himself has nothing more than. He takes Zabuza very lightly despite having no actual trump card. Too rushed, feels forced, things don't add up. Doesn't fell like Naruto, or even that realistic for that matter.

Naruto: I Copy Skills

DrWright
4.7
85 Chs

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Dragon_king22
Dragon_king22Lv4

you do know chunin are weak even zabuza was kinda weak as well asa is the hokage son so ofc he will tell his father and the ninjas everyone can spy on each other with ease literally everyone can get any information from konoha everyone knew Naruto was the jinchuriki and knew his skills literally anyone that just kinda sneaky can do it

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Jay11
Jay11Lv4

Bro called Kakashi weak💀

Dragon_king22:you do know chunin are weak even zabuza was kinda weak as well asa is the hokage son so ofc he will tell his father and the ninjas everyone can spy on each other with ease literally everyone can get any information from konoha everyone knew Naruto was the jinchuriki and knew his skills literally anyone that just kinda sneaky can do it
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Dragon_king22
Dragon_king22Lv4

yep og kakashi was weak

Jay11:Bro called Kakashi weak💀
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Jay11
Jay11Lv4

He was in the bingo book at that time if you think that’s weak then you didn’t watch or read naruto

Dragon_king22:yep og kakashi was weak
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Dragon_king22
Dragon_king22Lv4

actually a bunch of guys were in the bingo book so that really makes your excuse stupid 😂😂

Jay11:He was in the bingo book at that time if you think that’s weak then you didn’t watch or read naruto
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