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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv42mth
2024-08-20 13:25

Well, writing isn't bad, but this story is very frustrating. The interaction isn't really noteworthy. Characters feel lifeless. The author is a huge fan of itachi and this fact will be reminded in every chapter. He'll continue to say that itachi is talented more than mc. Also,it's not clear exactly what wishes that mc made, but mc has apparently the psuedo six eye. Now, what does he mean by pseudo six eye isn't clear .He can apparently see things at an atomic level, but it's still a pseudo.He somehow has infinity, but with chakra, it's easily passable, I'm not exactly sure how infinity is passable with just chakra . Overall, if the author's a fan of itachi, I'd suggest writing an itachi fanfic. Anyway, good luck to author's future endeavours.

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itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Everything is explained at least reach chapter 11

AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Why waste time reading untill 11chap if ppl get bored/annoyed after few? For me if I read 5chaps and it is annoying I wont try to read more even if it changes after 5-10 more chaps. First 5 chaps need to be good as presentation. Same with food if it looks shiity u wont even try it. If clothes look unappealing it doesn’t matter that they are comfy. Same with books. Good synopsis and cover makes u wanna try , few begining chaps show u if it worth at all.

itachi1010:Everything is explained at least reach chapter 11
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

What is annoying? The fact you don't know the wishes? the fact you want MC to be the best right off the bat but isn’t? If you can’t read the 10 chapters then drop, I don't care if your only reason to drop is something so dumb

AKARYUU:Why waste time reading untill 11chap if ppl get bored/annoyed after few? For me if I read 5chaps and it is annoying I wont try to read more even if it changes after 5-10 more chaps. First 5 chaps need to be good as presentation. Same with food if it looks shiity u wont even try it. If clothes look unappealing it doesn’t matter that they are comfy. Same with books. Good synopsis and cover makes u wanna try , few begining chaps show u if it worth at all.
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

Your distorted view of Itachi, is what ruins is storie

itachi1010:What is annoying? The fact you don't know the wishes? the fact you want MC to be the best right off the bat but isn’t? If you can’t read the 10 chapters then drop, I don't care if your only reason to drop is something so dumb
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

It's not distorted when I’m getting from the novel. It's not distorted when the creator of Naruto made it himself, go ahead and prove me wrong. If you have proof and not some fan theory, I will listen

XzDanielzX:Your distorted view of Itachi, is what ruins is storie
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

believe what you want, if you think a story with 3 stars has no problems and with you

itachi1010:It's not distorted when I’m getting from the novel. It's not distorted when the creator of Naruto made it himself, go ahead and prove me wrong. If you have proof and not some fan theory, I will listen
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

That's you running away

XzDanielzX:believe what you want, if you think a story with 3 stars has no problems and with you
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

👍😂

itachi1010:That's you running away
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Go ahead, I’m willing to listen. All I hear is fan theory, when I go out of my way to do some research. This is the last time I will reply to you since it is a waste of time, I will only reply if you bring something meaningful here

XzDanielzX:👍😂
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

Make a psychological analysis of Itachi and you will understand that he is a narcissist, he loved Konoha is Sasuke for believing that they were the only way to realize his goal, peace

itachi1010:Go ahead, I’m willing to listen. All I hear is fan theory, when I go out of my way to do some research. This is the last time I will reply to you since it is a waste of time, I will only reply if you bring something meaningful here
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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

The story is good. That’s all it is tho. It has its negatives and positives like anything else but the quality of this doesn’t make you have that itch where you want to read more and more. His wishes are explained in ch. 10 for those people that might be confused why he isn’t totally Op. still though the author has his own theories of things and integrates them into the story which may rub some people the wrong way.. for example kust the way his infinity works or how he’s basically not letting ‘gojo‘ acutally utilize his godly chakra control. Some other things don’t make sense either like him and itachi learning seals from kushina to them in a matter of a few paragraphs being able to use flying thunder god. There should be a normal progression of skills, you can’t jump from explaining how kushina can make huge storage seals to them both just having flying thunder god. There are so many sealing jutsu that could be incorporated into their fighting style and since they’ve learnt it they should also use them no? This story would be pretty good for someone who has never watched naruto because even the most basic things are overexplained so the story often times feels lifeless, adding to that is that it seems the author is not a native English speaker so some things sometimes just come out wrong I feel like. Positive things are that the author has a plan in mind for the story and acutally gives explanations to things others would just overlook. I also like that itachi is being brought up as a rival for mc even though it does feel like the author has a hard on for itachi making him even more talented than he originally was… all in all pretty good but not comparable to some of the top tier stories on webnovel

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