As much as I like overpowered characters, this one isn't for me. Beginning with the hard-to-read, without your intestines twisting, dialogue. That will probably get better rather quickly, but it still should be included in the review. Next we have genderbent Bell. Bella? It's not my cup of tea, but okay. For me, the dealbreaker is the characters that will become the main cast. [I'm ending after the second chapter, so it's mostly my speculations.] I'm pretty sure he will join Hestia's familia; I don't like Hestia; in the second chapter there was Eina, and I also hate her, and knowing that there will be Bell (Bella), there will be Liliruca, and I also hate her... So that's a no for me. I don't want to leave a review without anything really constructive, so: The protagonist's feeling of power is extremely weird. I mean, or guy has Anos's power yet acts really weird. The second chapter gave a feeling like he was weak. That's acceptable, but it should be said why that is. If that's because he hasn't familiarized himself with his abilities or something, as it is, it feels like Anos power got a nerf, just because the protagonist's thoughts aren't transparent enough. There is a lack of clear statement or at least a speculation of how strong he is in terms of the Danmachi world. The protagonist's personality is all over the place. Guy feels as if he has grown up on dad's jokes. But those were so bad that nobody even knew that they were supposed to be jokes. I mean, the "I will find work in hell" and random laughter in public. He is more like a caricature than a human. Feels like a downgraded version of Kyojuro Rengoku.
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Liked it!
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