Review Detail of NxSyth in A Skeptical Slytherins Revolution

The author has introduced some creative ideas into this fanfiction mainly about magic, that has been very interesting to read although the charactors all sound nearly the same, the author should try changing how he/she words things in every charactors perspective, also I think the author's portrayal of Dumbledore is faulty, in this fanfiction Dumbledore sounds like a middle aged man without any of the usual Dumbledore wisdom, the use of ai is destroying the story, the wording is terribly redundant in some areas and reading this awfully bland writing style makes me want to tear out my hair.