the English is good but the character is already doing things the most full grown wizards wouldnt even try like If you think turning into an animal is dangerous try messing with ur brain mcgonagall. it leaves me concerned that the character will be so ridiculously overpowered that any problems or conflict they encounter will be redundant since they'll solve it easily
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