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The story seems good and from the looks of it, the writer has a great way with words. They are learning how to work with perspective but they should soon find their equilibrium with them. The pacing and balance is not perfect but it is not so much that it affects anything. Overall, it’s a great experience with a progression structure where the MC also has experience of his past.

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Thanks for your encouraging words