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Review Detail of The_Schizophrenic in ANBU: Card System In Naruto

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The_Schizophrenic
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I think it's a good idea with potential, though the main character feels a bit flat because you often write her as foolish or careless. However, these are things that can be fixed, the story is just beginning. Don't give up, and thank you for the effort you put into this work.

ANBU: Card System In Naruto

EchoingDusk

Liked it!

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