The grammar needs serious work... So many 5 star reviews with nobody mentioning the simple fact that the grammar is horrendous at times is fishy.
Tobi_444
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COMMEYes they will protect the village at all cost just like Minato protected Village by sealing a monster in his child and and let his child face all the hate and live orphan at what cost?,to protect some random people..yes will of fire teach you to protect village over your family,lover, and friends that's how much will of fire make you protect but again ninja World is ruthless so I can't judge by my common sense
Daoist4MxvaV:technically the will of fire isn't exactly bad , in the world of Naruto , u can actually get power boosts when u are trying to protect something u cherish or to put it in simple terms u get a mental amp , by instilling the will of fire into children , when it comes to situations where they have resolved themselves to protect the village no matter what , they will gain access to more power than they have ever had b4 in their lives allowing them to gain more access to their potential or they will gain a mental boost . If u don't believe me read the land of waves arc , specifically Haku and Naruto conversation in the forest
Author who is female lead?hope it's Kushina, and please don't say that it'll destroy the orginal plot we are here to read about mc not some Dumbo chasing sasuke..oh yes you're author you can manage or Konan is also good love interest?
Tobi_444:I'll pin this comment, English ain't my first language so if people don't prefer a story with grammar mistakes it'll help save time
Well Ninja world is ruthless it would be disappointed if mc just forgive their parents plus they are not mc real parents they didn't even cared for mc And yes hope Kushina end up with mc she is my fav character as well hope just for plot author don't go with orginal plot
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I agree what you say I really hope he won't be forgiven them and will shut them up and same here I really hope the creator will make MC X kushina together and not the original for the sake of the plot
Man_of_culture_69:Well Ninja world is ruthless it would be disappointed if mc just forgive their parents plus they are not mc real parents they didn't even cared for mc And yes hope Kushina end up with mc she is my fav character as well hope just for plot author don't go with orginal plot
Because I wouldn't waste my time criticising or even rating trash. This fic is good, and the grammar improved over time, which means Author is doing something about it, and that's the whole point of the review system. Prospect readers get to gauge the work and not waste their time. And Author gets to see what the points of contention are and improve on them.
_oinkchan:Why can’t you be grateful that it’s understandable. Most fics on WebNovel have bad grammar and those that have good are often pretty bad storywise.
Odil:Because I wouldn't waste my time criticising or even rating trash. This fic is good, and the grammar improved over time, which means Author is doing something about it, and that's the whole point of the review system. Prospect readers get to gauge the work and not waste their time. And Author gets to see what the points of contention are and improve on them.
Tobi_444:I'll pin this comment, English ain't my first language so if people don't prefer a story with grammar mistakes it'll help save time
look, the only thing you need to do is fix dialogue, which for some reason you separate into different paragraphs. You're also missing punctuation. it goes like this: "Hello, I'm going to be Hokage," said Kazuki. Not like this, which is how you're doing it: "Hello, I'm going to be Hokage" Said Kazuki. it's literally that easy to fix
Tobi_444:I'll pin this comment, English ain't my first language so if people don't prefer a story with grammar mistakes it'll help save time
_oinkchan:Why can’t you be grateful that it’s understandable. Most fics on WebNovel have bad grammar and those that have good are often pretty bad storywise.
Man_of_culture_69:Author who is female lead?hope it's Kushina, and please don't say that it'll destroy the orginal plot we are here to read about mc not some Dumbo chasing sasuke..oh yes you're author you can manage or Konan is also good love interest?
Man_of_culture_69:Author who is female lead?hope it's Kushina, and please don't say that it'll destroy the orginal plot we are here to read about mc not some Dumbo chasing sasuke..oh yes you're author you can manage or Konan is also good love interest?
dan12036:The problem is that a lot of readers are not native English speakers, which in turn they read the story translated. Grammar count less then.
but wouldn't be getting with kushina be really dumb , if kushina ends up with minato , then no naruto and if there is no naruto , who will take on the otsusuki , unless the author gives the mc a broken template
Man_of_culture_69:Author who is female lead?hope it's Kushina, and please don't say that it'll destroy the orginal plot we are here to read about mc not some Dumbo chasing sasuke..oh yes you're author you can manage or Konan is also good love interest?