Febfew

Chapter 149 Author, the story is very good, but it is time to eliminate or reduce the weakness against the sun. This is becoming annoying in the narrative. Vampires are evolving, but they cannot increase their numbers considerably or reduce the importance of their weaknesses. If you do a serious analysis, you can see that all intelligent species have a greater ability to survive in war situations than vampires. Vampires are only powerful when the enemy is unprepared, has minimal knowledge of them, or is not at a total disadvantage in terms of terrain. And this is frustrating, especially since the original vampires always have considerable advantages, but here they are the same as any random vampire who dies by the dozen in vampire movies.

Author, the story is very good, but it's time to eliminate or reduce the weakness against the sun. This is becoming irritating in the narrative. Vampires are evolving, but they can't increase their numbers considerably or reduce the importance of their weaknesses. If you do a serious analysis, you can see that all intelligent species have a greater ability to survive in war situations than vampires. Vampires are only powerful when the enemy is unprepared, has minimal knowledge of them or is not at a total disadvantage in terms of terrain. And this is frustrating, especially because original vampires always have considerable advantages, but here they are the same as any random vampire who dies by the dozen in vampire movies.

There are some mistakes, obviously, the most serious being that the boss and the other "people" are shocked and then find an absurd excuse for a "person" to knock down a tree with one blow. It needs romance, after all it is a vampire story. And I would really like it to have a development of creating a vampire kingdom/clan with the MC leading it. And obviously the MC finding a way to neutralize the weaknesses of his new race, that's the most obvious point. Anyone with 2 brain cells wouldn't want to lose control or have a lapse like an intermittent madman because of blood or something else. Final: Writing 5; Update 4; Story 4; Character 3; World 5...

Author, let Saiken return to his original body. I want to see him in the war, it will be funny for a Bijuu to emerge from someone who is obviously not a Jinchuuriki hahahahah

And my observation was by absolute numbers and not by fanfic ranking, that is, most of the works in the original and fanfic rankings are not harem, including the animes of the season and even data from myanimelist. I don't know today, but I've checked a few times and this was the result...

I've looked at most fanfics and original works, and it really reduces the amount of readers because most authors don't know how to deal with the harem TAG. The reason is: forgotten, dolls without personality, decoration, sex dolls, zero character development, etc.

So this only makes things worse for the author. The exact copy of The Gamer system is ideal for skipping a part of the unnecessary and boring development of the MC. Besides, the MC getting too emotionally attached to original characters is a very annoying cliché. The vast majority of people, if they had the chance, wouldn't do this and would probably hate more than fear any enemy because they would be so mad with rage for having been dragged into such a violent verse and lost absolutely everything here. In the context of creating fanfic stories, people are very stuck in clichés because it's easier to create.

I didn't understand everything, sorry. But if it's Jiraiya's toad genjutsu, yes it should work normally.

This author has a bad habit of sometimes forcing impossible and absurd plots and giving them "logic"... Basically he eliminates the IQ of the extras and other characters to favor the MC or something that only he saw made sense. And this unfortunate person still ignores all the arguments and complaints and continues with the madness!

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