Review Detail of Tim_QQQ in Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

NewComer714:Thanks for your incredibly insightful structural review of the novel.

Tim_QQQ:The review was for people that don't like slow moving novels that don't go anywhere for hundreds of chapters. I thought that was obvious, but ill spell it out for you if you like... your novel currently has 30-40 chapters, of which basically nothing happens. congrats, your mc was born in a new world and is doing some small time nonsense for 30 chapters along with slice of life. your writing is pretty average for a webnovel that isn't a Chinese translation. so there's nothing new or worthwhile. there are already novels with this exact premise in the novel section (which have hundreds of chapters), there is literally nothing unique or interesting about your novel. and with your update schedule, will take years to go anywhere :D hope that was more insightful :D

Reverse_9612:Nothing happens in 30-40 chapters? Honey, did you miss the part where the MC got cast in Modern Family and an indie film called 127 Hours? Sounds like you might be suffering from a severe case of "action-adventure-or-bust" syndrome. Maybe a splash of slice-of-life isn't your flavor? No worries, friend! Head back to your cultivation novels where every five chapters promise an elder-snubbing, level-up bonanza. Just don't forget the tissues – those power-ups can get pretty tear-jerky.

NewComer714:Why are you offended? I didn't make any inappropriate comments. I simply thanked you for your structural review of the novel.

Tim_QQQ:the original review stated my opinion clearly. the novel will run for 300+chapters if the author doesn't drop, not everyone likes wasting time reading 10+chapters about a modern family casting interview. the author thought that wasn't enough of a review so I expanded. I obviously cared about the premise or else I wouldn't have read past the title, I have seen novels like this work; but this author is dragging it out, making chapters out of nothing just to get a word count limit or something. again my opinion was its a waste of time for 90% of people. Slice of life is only interesting when there are genuine character interaction/relationships, not boring filler. In 35 chapters you see nonsense boring filler 'slice of life' and the mc getting cast in a boring tv show that will itself take up way too many chapters and a movie. cast, its not done, it wasn't released.

Reverse_9612:35 chapters of filler? Honey, were you skimming with a blindfold on? Oh, but wait, you HAVE read the novel? Must have skimmed past the part where there's no chapter at all for casting interview, not to mention ten.. maybe TWO chapters for audition of Modern Family, but not TEN.Sure, there might be a few chapters that could've used a Red Bull IV drip, but there are certainly ones where the characters actually, you know, interact and stuff.So, you claim you lack time for "fillers" but have enough for online critiques? Sounds like your schedule involves more novel reviewing and less, oh, I don't know, reading the actual novel?

Tim_QQQ:The review was for people that don't like slow moving novels that don't go anywhere for hundreds of chapters. I thought that was obvious, but ill spell it out for you if you like... your novel currently has 30-40 chapters, of which basically nothing happens. congrats, your mc was born in a new world and is doing some small time nonsense for 30 chapters along with slice of life. your writing is pretty average for a webnovel that isn't a Chinese translation. so there's nothing new or worthwhile. there are already novels with this exact premise in the novel section (which have hundreds of chapters), there is literally nothing unique or interesting about your novel. and with your update schedule, will take years to go anywhere :D hope that was more insightful :D