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NewComer714

NewComer714

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Each person bears their own burden, each day a repetitive sight; The flame that once kindled motivation now flickers dimmer with every fight. We all feel different emotions, though some days we're filled with gloom, They say life's precious, even in darkness, as rare as happiness may bloom. Tough times surround us, sadness seems to win, Making us crave for an end, so we don't hurt within. Even in my darkest hour, when ending it all seems right, I wonder how God or the universe will guide my life, in ways that delight.

2020-07-23 JointGlobal
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à DarkStarMaster

    There is, look at this novel description.

    Ch 226 Moving out
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    Répondu à Jicenixe
    Despite his disappointment, Ian decided to have one last look around, hoping to find anything of importance. He checked under the bed, under the desk, and even in the corners, not expecting to find anything of value. But as he was about to leave, his gaze fell upon an ordinary-looking notebook tucked away on a bookshelf. Curiosity piqued, he picked it up and flipped to the first page. His jaw dropped when he read the words "Lucas Knight's Diary" scrawled across the front in messy handwriting.
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à ali_seifi

    Because he eliminated the Barzini's soldiers and Tattaglia associate.

    Ch 69 Departure
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    Répondu à priyanshu_tak

    I watched the movie, and she didn't. They got interrupted by Max.

    "You stole my first kiss!" Deborah exclaimed, annoyed.
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à EroFan

    Well, Captain Obvious, I'm well aware that he can be as stingy as he wants with his 'power stones.' But you know what? He could've just moved on or even read quietly for free, since my novel is available for free, in case you missed that part. But no, he had to leave a one-star review as if he's entitled to a refund for his hurt feelings. And since he decided to complain in my face, I'll exercise my right to call him stingy. Before you start justifying his review as a reader, let me remind you that as an author, I have the right to post or not post any chapters I want, whenever I want. You guys don't own me. I'm here sharing my work for free, and I'll not take it lightly when someone leaves such a nasty review. So, next time, think twice before you come at me. Just saying.

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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

    Lol. What do you mean by 'for the plot'? Anyone who saw someone kill so many people in an instant without even moving would be terrified. It's not like a video game where the NPCs barely react to it.

    Ch 67 New Ability, Multi-Kill, Urgency
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Burner_Acc_1957

    I guess that would be it for this novel then.

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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Sniperwoof

    Man, people really seem to love finding flaws in my novel.

    Lorenzo and his platoon exchanged weary glances, their faces a mix of pride and disbelief. They had survived the first onslaught, but they all knew in their hearts that the worst was yet to come. The officer clapped Lorenzo on the shoulder, a gesture of camaraderie and understanding. "Get some rest, all of you. You've earned it. But know this: when we engage the enemy again, I want you lot on the frontlines. We need your skills and determination more than ever."
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

    There's no problem if Lorenzo fought with force, but the four families have influence and political power, it is not gonna be easy dealing with them. Especially, if Lorenzo fought back with the mafia families, the Corleone would have to deal with Lorenzo too, because the Corleone is part of the five families, and Don Corleone wouldn't like it if he sees Lorenzo dealing with the other mafia families, even if he is a friend.

    Ch 62 System Mission, Choice and Decision
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à DaoistyxNV2e

    Bro, it's not only the Barzini that he'll worry about, it's the other three families. Besides, the mc may have the ability to protect himself, but the people close to him without the same abilities won't.

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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Daoist_bro

    Good idea. But spoiler, New York isn't gonna be MC's base later on, so it would be a bit pointless.

    Ch 60 Inferno (R-18)
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à CodeKingu

    First of all, let me make it clear that I am the one who writes every single line of main characters in this novel. It's insulting to assume that an AI generated it. If you had actually tinkered with AI yourself, you'd know that it's not possible to generate an entire story or every line of my novel and have it make sense. The interactions between characters and the development of my own world and characters are something only I, as the author, can create. Yes, I do use AI for proofreading and polishing my work, just like many other authors use human editors. I'm only human, and I might miss some typos and grammatical errors. I use AI as a tool to help me present my story in the best possible light, but the story itself comes from my imagination, not some soulless algorithm. As for your claim that AI could generate my novel, I'd like to point out that even if such technology existed, it would be prohibitively expensive, and the result would still be soulless. If my novel were indeed AI-generated, I'm sure many more readers would have complained by now. Yet, so far, you're the only one with this issue. Thank you.

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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Febfew

    Okay, I understand you bro...

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    Répondu à Foosh
    "I see..." Emilio mused, his interest piqued. However, he knew better than to make a move on her or Lorenzo, not yet. The Corleone family was too powerful, with influence in politics, wealth, and manpower. He couldn't afford to jeopardize his plans of becoming the most powerful mafia boss in New York over his interest in Lorenzo or his fiance.
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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à Gengar_The_Fool

    Only the young one, but yeah, haha 😅

    "Mm, quite the intriguing individual," Don Vito mused internally as he observed Lorenzo. Then, with a paternal gesture, he added, "You remind me of my younger self, Lorenzo."
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    Répondu à Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

    It's his grandpa.

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    Répondu à DaoistJdI1lV

    A good idea, but it will take several years before Michael was able to kill the four heads of the four mafia families. It was a bit long for the MC that he might as well grow his family naturally.

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  • NewComer714
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    Répondu à OnlyGoodStuff_1

    Lorenzo:

    Lorenzo stroked her hair, soaking in the feel of her in his arms. "Shh... I know. I'm sorry for the deception, but I couldn't resist surprising you." He pulled back, wiping away her tears with his thumbs. "I've missed you so much, Deborah."
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    Répondu à Hahadavis

    Beauty and attraction are ageless, and just because he's a mature soul doesn't mean he's immune to it. Don't expect him to act like a decrepit old man who's lost all zest for life

    "That was close," he muttered to himself, a mix of adrenaline and relief pulsing through him. Despite the scare, a smile played on his lips.
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    Répondu à Zero_Requiem_2490

    Good idea.

    Ch 53 Return
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