Review Detail of Audatic in Black String of Fate

This is my second novel, so this story is made after learning and correcting all the past mistakes I made. It is a story with high focus on the protagonist, he won't be a perfect character right off the bat. I plan to make the characters have their own distinct personality and goals. The world building will be expansive, but not like the cultivation novels where one level is revealed after the other. Instead, it will go into more depth.And finally, I hope you guys give this novel the same support I got for my last one, even though it was an amateur work riddled with mistakes...