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I agree, Xavier ultimately is a conflicted individual. He is not an old wise sage-like character. He has areas he is weak in, one of them being good decisions and maturity. In the chapter you have commented, he is faced with a situation he never even imagined possible, so it makes sense for him to struggle hard. I did not design his personality to be perfectly complete from the start, but rather he will grow into one. Eu concordo, Xavier é, em última análise, um indivíduo em conflito. Ele não é um personagem parecido com um velho sábio. Ele tem áreas nas quais é fraco, uma delas sendo boas decisões e maturidade. No capítulo que você comentou, ele se depara com uma situação que nunca imaginou ser possível, então faz sentido que ele lute muito. Eu não projetei sua personalidade para ser perfeitamente completa desde o início, mas sim para que ele se transformasse em uma.
Well, Xavier is not the wisest of them all. If he was, he wouldn't be a Demon King in the first place. But don't worry, even though he may seem carefree and childish at times, there are instances later in the novel where his wisdom and experience shine through. Bem, Xavier não é o mais sábio de todos. Se fosse, não seria um Demon King. Mas não se preocupem, apesar de, por vezes, parecer despreocupado e infantil, há momentos mais tarde no romance em que a sua sabedoria e experiência transparecem. (Sry, I don't speak Portuguese so I used Google Translate)
Thanks for reading! The character sketch I have for Xavier does not fit him as an anti-hero, nor fully fits him in as a villain. It would be morally ambiguous which would leave people questioning his alignment. I've put a lot of thought into his character...
Hi, thanks for reading! Your support really gives a lot of motivation! Rest assured, I spent quite a lot of time designing this character, it definitely doesn't fit into a 1D character trope. To not spoil stuff, all I can say, you won't be disappointed.
Hmm... Is it really the hero? :)
Oh, thanks! Must've somehow slipped past Grammarly...
Not really, more like jarvis
This is my second novel, so this story is made after learning and correcting all the past mistakes I made. It is a story with high focus on the protagonist, he won't be a perfect character right off the bat. I plan to make the characters have their own distinct personality and goals. The world building will be expansive, but not like the cultivation novels where one level is revealed after the other. Instead, it will go into more depth.And finally, I hope you guys give this novel the same support I got for my last one, even though it was an amateur work riddled with mistakes...