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Review Detail of Humbuub in Naruto: Mixed Heritage

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Writing is meh, sometimes I thought I repeat a page due to redundancies. The story is boring, MC is an Uchiha/Uzumaki orphan right after the destruction of Whirlpool village, yet we've been reading boring AF story about MC grinding and nonsense dialogues. Not to mention the inconsistencies. MC is so bland, he does nothing but train and look at his stats. Updates are the only commendable thing so far. I suggest to skip the grinding, since you never define the power levels. Also skip the ninjutsu training. It's a waste of everyone's time. He got a freaking Sharingan ffs, so unless he creates his own Jutsu, don't bother writing about Ninjutsu training.

Naruto: Mixed Heritage

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