The writing quality is not bad even though there are some grammar and spelling mistakes. This fic is also updated frequently but the story is not good. Idk why I’m reading about a 6 year old for more then a couple chapters. The pacing is weird and it’s boring to read I’m surprised there has not been a lower review sooner. The time Skip chapters really sold how little I wanted to read anymore.

this one is a good shield hero fic, a pretty good and well made fic for a new author and i can see ur improvements throughout the chapters. i dont have problems to ur story updates cus u update regularly. morsans character development is neither good or bad, i jut found it in the middle, also mc shouldnt feel guilt to others stupid decisions. the downside is ur writing style, u should break the lines like 3-4 sentences each paragraphs cuz anymore than 5 becomes a hassle to read, i believe this must also be the reason why others found this fic boring. you should also avoid too much info drops, others will just basically skip read it. u should also avoid multiple chapter as a time skip. well this is all my honest opinions and hope for more incoming chapters

This is one of those underrated fanfic out there! The story progressing steadily in a good way. So you all try check this one out, I think it worth your time to read.

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Lets give it a read. I like what you said author and i will read this now and see how it goes. Im prepared to use eye bleach if necessary but its good that rather than writting without care you trully try to improve. Now... Whats a morsan?. Also, while its to bad your mc dosnt has Raphtalia as a lover. Lets see how it goes. I will suppose the mc¿s hârêm is all original characters, but i would like to recommend saving Rino(adventurer girl who was from Motoyasu party who later is sold as slave by Malty) if its not to late.

It is great. I can not wait for the heroes to arrive. Also do we have love interest in sight or nothing for now? Anyway hope to see a lot more chapters.

This novel really surprised me, I liked it, now it's in my top 7 best, I recommend everyone to read it.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙👏👏👏👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

What can I say other than it’s a good Fanfic. I already like the Rising of the Shield hero, but disliked the other idiot ‘heroes’. However, I really liked Naofumi, so as long as the main character gets his slave harem and never gets NTRd while being a bro tk Naofumi, I am happy. As for the Patreon, I think you can ask for a little more as a dollar for what you are offering seems cheap. Some have patterns more expensive and offer less after all.

so far it's been a great success for me and will like to know more .Thanks for a great story [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]