Review Detail of UelUel in NEON UPRISING

The writing quality is nice with only a little grammar problem that seems like it can be improved more but it doesn't affect how easy it is to follow and understand the story. The first part of your synopsis reminds me of that movie of Leonardo DiCaprio and Tom Hanks "Catch me if you can". How MC gives that same feeling as how capable he truly is. Although, your first chapter is kinda low on impact or intensity. I check all of your available chapters and I think chapter three "The Core" would do good as an introduction chapter to attract the attention of readers. Good luck and keep working on your book.