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The character cultivation is well orientated alongside the plot. I dared myself to try something different and honestly, it was worth it. Each sentence urges you to go to the next.Despite it being fantasy, there's still a lot I can relate it to in real life.Even though there's some dangling between tenses, but it's still a hard call to drop the story. Overall, good job author.