Review Detail of Danny_567 in Reincarnated with JJK Powerset in Harry Potter!

Author i have read till chapter 10 ,the idea the concept are all good but you are forcing vocabulary on each line of the chapter ,use simple english and at some instances add complex vocabulary it rather goes well and it does not make reading a hassle because when i see your paragraphs and complex vocabulary i just read the crux and move on ,its just not enjoyable ,i mean look at warhammer they too use vocabulary but its not a hassle so maybe just improve your writing style for the readers ,Remember the reader is the one who reads and dont make reading a hassle ,your style of writing is just a info dump remember the story is not about complex vocabulary its about making the readers feel enjoyable.