Chapter 21.Writing Quality: 4It is good. It is readable and sectioned well. I didn't really find it as engaging.Story Development: 3 It was okay. Wynne doing something about the faunus and the community (sorry don't remember what it was called but he worked with Robyn the huntress and her group). The development between him and his older sister and him just teleporting to Beacon and back home was just stale in my perspective.Character Design: 2Wynn got over powered really fast. I don't have a problem with overpowered characters. The other characters don't bring a connection to me in anyway. They just feel like fillers.. I didn't really feel connected with the characters.Update Stability: 3I stopped reading it once I read chapter 21 which was the latest update (25 days ago). At the time, there was a scheduled update. However, since it has been 25 days so far, I lowered the update stability to 3.World Background: 1The world hasn't been explored outside of what was normally mentioned in various other RWBY fanfictions which I assuming the same places are Canon. I have never watched or read the Canon RWBY so I can't give a solid guaranteed score for this. Overall: 2.6Though a low score, I would not say it is a bad novel. I do hope the author writes more and I do look forward for future development. Even if it doesn't improve but stays the same quality, it would be a good read to pass time if you want.Also just because I gave a low score doesn't mean it will be so for you. I think you should read it for yourself and decide whether it is for you or not.
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