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Review Detail of NovaAias in YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

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This is being written at the time Pegasus is dueling Yuna, but so far, I like the story, but I don't really think I can really truly enjoy it. I like the fact that the the MC is a pretty introverted person compared to fics where the MC is very out there and charismatic, but I'm not really into the bit of how she has a passive expression and only speaks 1-3 words at a time like she's Yugioh Komi-san (which may just be the inspiration, idk) but when she's alone, she can rant aloud to the duel system and such. It's just that I'm sure even shy people can speak more than a handful of works at a time, which she is able to apparently do with ease during a duel, but it's a like a switch once she's done, so it's just really weird compared to her just being naturally timid but able to hold a conversation. And of course, bringing a string of cards from essentially the future eras of Yugioh into DM. While I get the rationale behind in, if you were gonna do that, you may as well have started at Battle City or even GX. All in all I like the story for what it is, but I don't really think I can fully enjoy it though, but I still wish the author the best in writing it all the same.

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

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Thanks for the review!

RS_1
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i reread your mha fic it's still good

Yellow_Duck_Toy:Thanks for the review!