Review Detail of Daynightdreamer in BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION)

It's still too early to tell but the book has some promise. I would like for the author to create an auxiliary chapter for the timelines because I got lost a bit in the first chapter, trying to keep a sense of what happened when without getting lost in the weeds. And work on your transitions from scene to scene..Nice use of vocabularies and all the best. Some minor issues here and there disappear with time. All the best