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BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION)

Auteur: Jujumaster
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Lisez le roman BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION) écrit par l'auteur Jujumaster publié sur WebNovel. Magic, Mana and Mystical Beasts. Romance and Love.Betrayal, Blood and Death. These elements contribute to form the Mysteries of the world.Gerald Zheng was burdened with heavy tasks after the death of ...

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Magic, Mana and Mystical Beasts. Romance and Love. Betrayal, Blood and Death. These elements contribute to form the Mysteries of the world. Gerald Zheng was burdened with heavy tasks after the death of his father, the emperor of Camelot. His family was scattered. Competitors of his birth right sort to take his life in order to claim what is rightfully his. Zheng had to leave his home continent, away from all the drama. He will begin his journey to build strength, to be the mightiest man on Earth, on a continent foreign to him. Only by gaining might can he right the wrongs. FEAR THE RETURN OF ZHENG!

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The_critcal_thinka
The_critcal_thinkaLv1The_critcal_thinka

Another work from Jujumaster. This writing in this one is miles better than the other novels that he has written. Conventionally, the MC of the novel is introduced first. Stories of side characters aren't given much shine. Although it is still early to speak, BONES FLAMES AND ICE seems to indulge in making side characters memorable and not a one-off object. Still some glitches in writing, I think twice within the five chapters but you won't notice AT all because of how indulging the story is. Juju pls make the MC a dragon

WriterTheos
WriterTheosLv13WriterTheos

Writing a review after the first chapter. To me, the first half of it was nothing but a big info dump. A history lesson. In the first chapter you need to focus on the most important stuff: The main character. their foundation, their will, their ambition, their drive, what they want, why they want it, who they are. That's what matters since that is why the readers are most likely reading your story. Instead we got a ton of history I fo about the warring nations, when none of that was really nessecary. if we started at the end with those soldiers and the mage, then everything could slowly be revealed throughout the story, not just dumped onto you at the start. still, the ending was good so I liked it overall.

mattfuncool
mattfuncoolLv5mattfuncool

The author of this book is on the path of greatness with this story. I just need to update always, give a little more details, and don't forget to double-check for any mistakes.

Daynightdreamer
DaynightdreamerLv11Daynightdreamer

It's still too early to tell but the book has some promise. I would like for the author to create an auxiliary chapter for the timelines because I got lost a bit in the first chapter, trying to keep a sense of what happened when without getting lost in the weeds. And work on your transitions from scene to scene..Nice use of vocabularies and all the best. Some minor issues here and there disappear with time. All the best

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