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Review Detail of Idyllic_Scribe in Celestial Bloodline

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I think that this story could be a lot and should be a lot. It seems very extraordinary in terms of the plot line and the way in which the author is telling the story. I think the only issue is the fact that this story definitely doesn't hook the reader until the 3rd or 4th chapter. Why don't expect the author to change this I do think that some hooking material in the 1st few chapters can definitely improve the book.

Celestial Bloodline

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Liked it!

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