Idyllic_Scribe

While this story is a common trope, I do see tons of ideas that could become important. I also have built a connection with Kazuki, to the point where sometimes I want to hug him, and others I want to hit him. In all, I think this is the start to a very good story! Keep going author-nim!

oh no, don't worry! This story is not about Ba Yihan reading the book on Yue Liangli![img=recommend]

I think this superhero story is rather generic, but if you like these types of magical and unique worlds, then this book is definitely for you. It wasn't bad, and overall rather good. I think that this would be a could story as long as the author develops each character uniquely.

Of course! Super good book so far!!!!

The first 2 chaps start off slow ngl but push through! After that, the story fully devolopes and your able to travel withe MC. Its rather interedting, and love the dif povs that switch. Good job!

Never knee I 2ould be interested in necromancy, but here I am! There id a good blend amongst the Martial arts and necromancy. I will say, the book dors start off really slow, so wuick w a's rning. But after thet, it most likely gets better! Good job author!

Please take this review lightly, since you have a lot of time to look over everything and become a better writer! I will say, you should definitely impeove the quality. If that seems like a lot, post one or two chaps a week. it is better! Remember, quality over quantity!

In case anyone needs a little bit of comedy in their lives, this is a good story for that. It is sarcastis, satirical, and breaks the limits of the imagineation. Of course, in a good way. Very incredible book! I personally love it!

I think that this story could be a lot and should be a lot. It seems very extraordinary in terms of the plot line and the way in which the author is telling the story. I think the only issue is the fact that this story definitely doesn't hook the reader until the 3rd or 4th chapter. Why don't expect the author to change this I do think that some hooking material in the 1st few chapters can definitely improve the book.

The characters are very unique and childlike without being childish. Very good story, and I especially love the characters and their little descriptions.