Review Detail of king_of_fanfic in In Danmachi as Arthur Leywin

Writhing quality-it's good(5⭐) Story development- I think most of the story is predictable(2⭐) Character Design- the mc acts like a Bata mc like that time he decide to save those girls for no reason(almost died in the process), when before they attack him because they thought he was spying on them(which made no sense since the mc didn't even see when they were coming), after that he fell unconscious which revealed his identity and that he didn't have a falna(which their goddess reported including how he looks and his powers to Ouranos), after that he ask if he could join them when they are going to the dungeon which they said yes.(that's is where I stop reading.(2⭐)) Updating Stability- is ok.(3⭐) World Background- I thought it was moving too fast (3⭐)