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2023-01-13 16:04

I hardly ever give a fanfic such a low score and even more rarely do I do so in Chapter 6, but the MC's personality is pretty bad. He reminds me of when I was 6 and punching the other kids for something like calling me an idiot or jumping in the cafeteria line. I really thought it was stupid for the MC to get angry and blame Hermes for using his soul to pressure the MC when the MC invaded Hermes' God realm, even accidentally. It was like someone breaking into a house and getting mad at the owner who pointed a gun at the intruder and asked who he was or called the police as if it was his right to break into the house, even if by accident, and the owner should just ignore it. the invader. Even more ridiculous is how after Bete was rude to order the MC to get out of front of a door he decided to punch Bete and destroy a house in the process so Loki apologized to the MC and gave a potion to heal the hand that the MC injured with the punch. I just don't know what to say about it, this fanfic is too surreal, even Yun Che wasn't that ridiculous in Against the gods.

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LunaSkylair
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I'm sorry you felt that way. Though I hope you'd read a bit further and see if this isn't really your cup of tea.

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LunaSkylair
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Hi everyone. It has been a little more than a week since the novel was posted, and I have to say, many people already held plenty of questions to ask me regarding my novel and the general directions of it, so here I am. A little Q & A with the most asked questions up until now. Q - Will my novel follow Chinese fiction or grow to become some Chinese tale? A - My novel will not adhere to such a style. Although it may seem like that as there are SOME elements pointing to that, you can rest assured. My heart is not tainted with dumb young masters or MC always being the strongest Gary Stu of this planet. Evidence could be the first few chapters, as for those who know what happened, Ryuu didn't have it that easy. To give it a final reply, please do not think I'll follow any specific fiction. My novel is a mix of many elements together I loved from all these different styles and even if it can point to one particular style like it has been doing until now, you can rest assured it won't become a Chinese tale at all. Q - Will you make it a Harem? A - I don't know. It has been overused a bit too much in Danmachi to have all the girls at the MC's feet, though Ryuu has already been shown to not give his 'affections' to just anyone. The interaction between Tiona and Ryuu is just a result of many things and probably won't be repeated for any other girl. Though I won't shamelessly promise anything. Please, read this without too much prejudice, as I really am not focusing on romance. The plot I have in mind is too grand to be shackled by something so small and common you'd see in any other Danmachi fanfic...! (Though Tiona has a special place in my small heart, she is already confirmed to be Ryuu's partner at this point, no matter what.) Q - What is the direction of your novel? A - [SPOILERS] This question is an interesting one. Ultimately, I would like to completely clean up the Danmachi World. I do not know how many chapters that will take, but think clearly about the concept of "Apocalypse" and "Disaster" as they will be mentioned multiple times in my novel and there are special reasons for that. Some of you may already have connected the dots as from the very first chapters, it was implied that a disaster could befall the Danmachi World, I am just confirming your assumptions... I hope these provide enough information for you to decide whether this novel is something you'd like to read… If it's not your cup of tea, you can tell me why, as that would help me out too... Thank you for reading.

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