I have not read past 10 chapters but I can say for sure that the story isn't going to get better due to the MC character being a dumb and arrogant perk like as if the world owes. - He is disrespectful to literal god for what, just stupid pride that has nothing to back it up. Dragons are meant to be WISE and strong with pride to their power and knowledge not without any reason. A Chinese MC has at least some boundaries to not cross due to their brain but not in this novel. - The author changes some characters personalities, I would be OK if this was an AU but nope. - Good luck with your novel and I don't mind if you delete this review as I just wrote for other readers.
LunaSkylair
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COMMEThank you for wishing me luck! While I don't agree with most of your review, it's still helpful for me as I am still reviewing my character's interactions with others and overall personality. Ryuu was not intended to be too rude with Gods, also the fact he's from the dragon race shouldn't elicit that much prejudice in his actions! But I do understand where you're coming from. Thanks for giving my novel a try and reach chapter 10 despite everything. - P.S. I do not need to remove your review to feel better about myself. As I am still struggling to learn, I'll leave it here for anyone dissatisfied with my novel to comment this and tell me if it's truly like that.
You do know that they live longer than a human so they properly mature the same, that means they will be wiser due to their longer life span. It is a fact type of stereotype.
Kamikaze_Eagle:I haven't read the story but I just gotta say where TF did you get the idea dragons had to be wise? Sounds like a stereotype to me and one that doesn't even make any sense.
Or they could end up growing arrogant and brash. Humans grow wiser from learning from mistakes but what about a powerful dragon who can brute force things to go their way. There is no guarantee they'll grow wise. Maybe some do but I doubt all of them do.
One_Of_The_Players:You do know that they live longer than a human so they properly mature the same, that means they will be wiser due to their longer life span. It is a fact type of stereotype.
Kamikaze_Eagle:Or they could end up growing arrogant and brash. Humans grow wiser from learning from mistakes but what about a powerful dragon who can brute force things to go their way. There is no guarantee they'll grow wise. Maybe some do but I doubt all of them do.
you're saying that for example in a place in the world, some person is intelligent, the whole state is intelligent. There can't be dumb people. This is the kind of thing you're saying.
One_Of_The_Players:Mate at least they have the strength to back up their arrogance
One_Of_The_Players:Mate at least they have the strength to back up their arrogance
In most folklore, Dragons are very often associated with Wisdom. So it’s not that much of a stretch for them to think that the MC would be wise 🤷♂️
Kamikaze_Eagle:I haven't read the story but I just gotta say where TF did you get the idea dragons had to be wise? Sounds like a stereotype to me and one that doesn't even make any sense.
Do you live under a stone? There are thousands of examples of wise dragons, greedy dragons, arrogant dragons, but the most prevalent in all of fiction is the wise dragon.
Kamikaze_Eagle:I haven't read the story but I just gotta say where TF did you get the idea dragons had to be wise? Sounds like a stereotype to me and one that doesn't even make any sense.
I'm well aware of that dude, if you'd pay attention to what I typed earlier I wrote that because he assumed that he would be wise just because he was a dragon. And sure plenty of dragons are portrayed to be wise but many others aren't.
Gabichu_Yeah:Do you live under a stone? There are thousands of examples of wise dragons, greedy dragons, arrogant dragons, but the most prevalent in all of fiction is the wise dragon.
I said “wise” since no matter if you are smart or not, you will still learn basic things (normal and healthy).
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