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Review Detail of The_Jeffinator in Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

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ew, just split up your paragraphs, figure out what pov you want, learn how to smoothly transition from one character to the next and flesh out your dialogue to something more organic.

Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

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