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The_Jeffinator

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I read probably way too much but my standards are also exacting so if I complained about your book, I stand by my opinion because I also probably gave you a break down on why I didn't like it.

2021-10-14 JointUnited States
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1d
    Répondu à The_Jeffinator

    nevermind, I realized she had interim tutors when sunny left to ascend

    Ch 89 Everything is Better with Ice Cream
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1d
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    I'm confused... I thought she was training with sunny by now

    Ch 89 Everything is Better with Ice Cream
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1d
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    I did this as a kid. Kinda fun/ ticklish with milk or water, but pray to whatever lord you have to save you if you try anything carbonated, because that experience was like a thousand ants crawling and chewing their way through your nostrils. You can't do it without choking half to death, stabbing yourself with the straw, and crying. Even if you can hold down the tears, your eyes would water until you had to wipe them..

    If one could fit an entire biscuit in his mouth, the other naturally had to fit two. It was all fun and games until Brock got the idea to try and drink the juice through his nose with a straw. While he ended up being mildly successful, the gross factor was too much for their mother. 
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1d
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    Aren't hallows supposed be rare because their bodies do not always die when they die in the dream realm but most of the time they do? Am I just confused?

     Those who made it out and back to the real world would become Awakened like herself. Those who didn't…those who perished would become hollow.
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator3d
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    Not really but, I'm getting kinda upset that rain's parents are such pushovers when it comes to her yet know intimately how horrible the world is. It has come to my dawning attention that both parents have high level access to sources of information that should make them train their kids and take that training super seriously. Yet they are very avant-garde about rain having a tutor they have no reason to believe is any more talented than noble herself is. There's protecting one's child, and then there's failing to prepare their child. Of course, we have the honor of knowing she's in good hands, and this is in no way a critique of the work so far, the work has been phenomenal, however, her parents' attitude gives me secondhand worry for rain from an entirely different perspective. Just my feelings after seeing her dealing with something so serious here she goes to all lengths she reasonably can to avoid exposing herself, yet I don't see any sign of taking her daughters education in these matters seriously.

    Ch 25 Don't Break the Seer
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator4d
    Répondu à NobleQueenBee

    Second line, 13th paragraph from the bottom says something along the lines of "Only when she needs to pick something up and touch the floor to retrieve what was lost does she allow a moment of pain" or something like that.

    "Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator4d
    Répondu à The_Jeffinator

    only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up off the floor...

    Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator4d
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    Here it is.

    Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator4d
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    wasn't there just something about having to touch the floor to retrieve fallen objects?

    "Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
    The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator5d
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    this cliffhanger is badly placed. you gave us too much information and very little uncertainty.

    AN: I'm genuinely not sure about how I handled this interaction. I know it's not over, but there was a lot more that I wanted to put here. I know that Dumbledore's behaviour is a bit out of character, but there is a reason for it that you'll see in the next chapter. On the bright side, I'm really looking forward to writing the fight scene. As always, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator8d
    Répondu à Para_nite

    And here we have the ignoramus. Karen doesn't have a kekkei genkai huh? What the hell is that super special Chakra that heals people when they chew on her then? Oh, I guess you think Super Special abilities don't qualify as kekkei genkai? Abilities like dojutsus, and Chakra absorbers? Tell me, what is her super special healing Chakra that was the whole reason her mother died and she was fated to die playing doctor/ human sacrifice if not a kekkei genkai? Oh, and do me a favor while you're at it, tell me, since turn around is fair play and all, how did me belittling you make you feel? Good? good.

    Seeing the change, he was shocked, as he knew this was an ability that even very few pureblooded Uzumaki could have.
    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Kingkillerdj2023
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator8d
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    it should have been 2 fragments. classes give 1 extra fragment while tiers are multiplicative. for example, a dormant beast killing an unholy titan would yield 448 fragments. if I understand it right, tiers reward 2 to the power of however many levels higher the kill was, classes just a flat multiplier 1 through 7. a fallen beast is worth 4 shards each right now, awakened 2. now that's different for normal awakened because they have soul cores and they absorb a fraction of the soul fragments of enemies they slay. THIS IS THE SPECIFIC REASON, ALONG WITH THE USE OF SOUL SHARDS, WHY NEPHIS PROGRESSES SO MUCH FASTER THAN SUNNY.

    (A/N- I'll be honest I don't know how I'm gonna do this part im gonna need someones help, for now that looks about right)
    Shadow slave: A Shadows Friend
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator9d
    Répondu à Kyatus

    Eh, I'd like to point out that echos really aren't that rare. Every active hunter gets them. Sunny just has an especially low rate of echos because officially, [Fated] holds him back but unofficially, guiltythree uses it as a pacing tactic. Something you have to remember is, despite sunny performing as the finisher/ the most efficient nightmare creature slaughteror, all of his companions hog all of the luck until he needs godly luck to recieve the few items he needs to pass every impossible trial in his way. literally everyone else receives memories and echoes regularly. Sunny farms swarms and while other people contribute a little. its perspective

    Shadow Slave: Necrosis
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator23d
    Répondu à JadeAndConstlation

    I hate its design personally. it would have been better with the hoop detached from itself instead of part of it's chest. Say it rested in an indent or as a bangle or crown of sorts that it could take out/off and manipulate with its arms or something. As part of a chest though... it just looks goofy.

    I was not sure if I wanted to see Hoopa show up in front of me someday and I definitely did not want to think about it right now, so I simply told Tatsumaki that it was possible before changing the topic to something different.
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
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    of heckin course he would weasel his way into adjuticating the tournament.

    The entire hall stood silent at the man's ominous warning before he nodded to himself and continued, "With that out of the way, I believe it's time for us to talk about the specifics of the tournament. As you probably know, there will be seven different tasks, each one taking place in a different school. Madame Maxime, who has graciously invited us into this prestigious institution will announce the first task after I am done with my announcements, so I will leave the details to her. Each task can have one or multiple champions and the winner of each task will receive a very special prize which will be revealed with the tasks are announced. You will be scored with a score out of ten, from each of our expert judges, culminating in a score out of fifty. Now, to introduce our judges which will remain until the end of the tournament."
    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
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    in that case shouldn't he be worried that they will perform the impure world reincarnation themselves? did he even get rid of all of inoichi's DNA?

    Of course, there's also the possibility that when the dead walk among the living again, some people recognize them. No matter, but I'm not going to revive Inoichi no matter how much the Yamanaka clan asks if Shikaku connects the dots and informs them. Not only because of what he did but because then the information for which he died would fall into Konoha's hands.
    Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
    Répondu à Avyya_Aggarwal

    I hope he doesn't. he's been a little too shameless recently and doesn't understand the immensity of mt. tai

    "Stuff like this can happen, and I don't think that it will change the end result. I'm going to leave with my Badge regardless. Lucario breaking through to the platinum stage won't change that," I continued cooly. Stephanie's smile widened at my words and she actually released a chuckle. "I like your confidence. We'll see how long you can keep that confidence of yours," she replied, putting an end to this little interlude. Our Pokemon had temporarily put a stop to their battle while Stephanie and I had our little exchange, but both remained poised for action the whole time.
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
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    Great fight. Has mikhail not figured out how to get his gyarados' to fly yet?

    Ch 679 CH59 (673), First Gym Battle (6)
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
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    I was really hoping Mothra would pull out her size manipulation to perform a super-sized seismic toss. Grab the mon, spin in mid air while supersizing for extra leverage, and just bury that sucker 20 feet into the ground. Conservation of momentum would make that move soooooo powerful

    Ch 678 CH58 (672), First Gym Battle (5)
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
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  • The_Jeffinator
    The_Jeffinator1mth
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    bro... don't leave me hanging

    Ch 1 Convergence of Magic: The Overlord X Harry Potter
    Convergence of Magic: The Overlord X Harry Potter
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