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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv141yr
2023-01-14 14:16

There's a really good story here probably the grammar isn't at an acceptable level. and the story isn't worth having to auto correct it all in my head while I read this. No doubt other people can ignore it and find this story entertaining. the author does warn you so I didn't lower the rating any further. its possible the story could be a 5/5 otherwise but im going to have to pass on it. good luck!

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I whould give it's 5 star ,because mc attitude with girls is quite admirable. He doesn't create some useless drama and wants to take girls which he liked. That's whould be already enough for a good reading time. Unfortunately, author is buthurt stupid mongrel. That's dislikes a useless trophy wifes (which I totally agree with) and wants to make things more "logical". Let's look at his closely. 11 years old reincarnator tells his mommy that he takes over her son body - it's great that this stupidity was glosed over soon, but just think about it. Let it sink. How dumb is this? Don't get me started that relationship and interaction between them, is literally one paragraph. What readers supposed to think? Does he start to see her as his actual mother even though he does have family before? No answers, just assume and pretend that this is right thing to do. Okay... Fine. Every girls start to train with weapons and different skills to be useful... Let me tell you, they wasn't intrested in any of this skills. They not coming from martial arts or shounen anime. And author just saying, yeah from now on they all useful. Talented and expirienced in killing and taking care of themselves... Normal,little girls, living an easy life in modern time...just with a bit training talking about claiming others life. They could take anothers route to help out mc, like working on getting money. Actually be housewifes ,whatever feminists talking it's a good way to support husband. Learning different skills in future like alchemy, blacksmitting, anything at all. Living they lives as normal girls. No, because author was hurt by stupid cringe, he create different stupid cringe and claim this stupidity as smart decision. Well f7cking done. Brilliant. Now I am buthurt. Thank you,mongrel.

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