well I won't get to into it but the grammar is bad the wishes he makes are pretty dumb but it would be a cool concept if it was executed right I guess
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COMMEUm yeah I just read your synopsis and just casually spotted like 7-8 grammatical errors in just that alone.
ZoroTraineeWriter:I used grammar correction still bad ahh. Hahahaha