Review Detail of Jheydi327 in Face-Slapping System

Author... At this moment your writing a journal or a diary rather than a Story. . The action fighting scene are bland and lack detail like bammm! Or wooooshh! ... I don't know what will happen bout many will irritate and drop this.. And all this time it's all MC's inner Monologue and the Paragraphs are being cut every sentence... This wi ruin the quality of your story TBH.. Currently reading in chap 116... I hope this will fixx and I'm expecting more for the development of MC.. thanks I really enjoy reading this..