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Jheydi3271dCommentéUnable to forge a reply, Jordan continued to glare as Sam left feeling victory for the first time in a long while.- Jheydi32724dRépondu à DThorn
Like FR. Even though it's good but it feels bland to read every single repeating dialogues...
"But it feels good, doesn't it?" I said, thrusting deeper. "You like the pain. You like feeling my cock inside you, filling you up, such a kinky whore." - Jheydi32727dCommenté
Was this Fic more focus to football I guess?
Hopefully I'll be able to shoehorn in some good and fresh content, and, of course, more football! Yes, football. Checkmate, Americans! - Jheydi32727dCommenté
Bruh FR.. I don't know how I dropped the p*rnhwa but his reactions seems weird and unbearable at the same time. .
Also, I was thinking of giving Jair an OC body instead of Dae Ho's. (For some reason just looking at Dae Ho kind of pisses me off and makes want to punch the air.) But! Doing that would require more groundwork. - Jheydi32727dCommenté
What about My landlady Noona? Well...
Is there anything you'd like me to add? (Please don't ask me do add more p*rnhwas unless it's an overall short one - I've had people ask me to read Circles, but it's damn over 150 chapters long, and I don't have time to read it, make a detailed outline of each girl's personality, and incorporate it in the story.) - Jheydi3271mthCommentéHer heart fluttered at the thought of him loving her romantically and she couldn't help but smile 'Oh, the butterflies in my stomach are flapping their wings...'
- Jheydi3271mthRépondu à Akkuzz_69
Can you minimize this author ?. Was it necessary to use this exclamation marks every time they Explain something?.. Can they be more calm and collected?....
"Oh? So, those who have special physiques can see other's special physiques?!" Zhao Tian asked in amusement and Xia Shenyi replied shaking her head "No, No... I found yours because I have a physique that could detect if others have rare physiques." - Jheydi3271mthCommenté
Kazuma is proud:
Hearing her teasing, Zhao Tian spoke "You want me to punch you again?" - Jheydi3271mthCommenté"And that's when I got this pendant... I got really curious, because this pendant may belong to the old war which shook the whole realm. And while researching, I suddenly got sucked into it and since then I was living here."
- Jheydi3271mthRépondu à Akkuzz_69
Well I hope it's not overuse cause I'm not used to read mtl novels... It always makes me think every time why would there an Exclamation mark every time they talk or in every grammar? Are they retard?. good chapter BTW
The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. - Jheydi3271mthCommentéAs Zhao Ying was wearing half pants, Zhao Tian grabbed her bare thighs "Yeah, yeah... i know." His finger gently pressed into the softness of her thighs, while the motion caused her breasts to lightly brush against his back.
- Jheydi3271mthRépondu à Akkuzz_69*tap* At this time, another woman entered the room "Ying'er, how many times have I told you not to disturb Tian'er?" she asked in a soft tone looking at Zhao Ying riding on top of Zhao Tian while he was exercising.
- Jheydi3271mthCommenté
"!" author do you think she's talking softly if you use this mark?.. Hmmm
The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. - Jheydi3271mthRépondu à Melon_daomaster_9
Soo. .. Based on the synopsis, is this a plot wheres MC thinks whit his d*ck first, second and third before UISNG his brain??.. Was MC stealing others wives (even though they're already happy but still wants to steal them just like a trophy of just to satisfy his d*ck? ).. Was this another Pokémon harem?.. Wish fulfilments?. .If it is , well not my cup of tea. So tired and boring to read with this kind of not executed well stories(specially harem novels if it's not written well) nowadays...
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See.. This kind of MC mindset sucks.. Sti haven't move on..
'Fuck,' looking at Tsubasa's face, I felt a pang of guilt in my heart. Had I truly not moved on? Am I really considering killing this poor girl because of someone that I've not seen for millions of years? - Jheydi3271mthRépondu à FinnsRevenge
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No morning BJ?
"Good morning, my baby," she yawned and stretched, as she held her arms up at me as if calling a little child to embrace. I fell into her arms, embracing her tightly as I placed a kiss on her nape.