The story isn't horrible for what it is. A mash of clichéd game of throne fanfic elements fused together while still trying to find its own unique pathway to take. some people like cliche. emotional situations fall short but that can improve as the authors writing and English improve. there's a decent story in here if the quality increase in future chapters. Also, The systems seems very vague and op basically just fitting to the users wants which is definitely a negative. other than that I'd say give the story a try you might like it.
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