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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv142yr
2022-10-29 13:54

Why!!!!!!? Why an OC!😭😭 The reason I don't like OCs is simply that I feel like authors are afraid of changing the timeline or creating a butterfly effect which by the way is screwed the moment another MC is on the world. and if that isn't enough, Harem will be for Takashi and not MC.. OC pairing... Harem yet Harem but not for Harem for MC but someone else WHY!!!!!!

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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

I regret depressing my self like this🤣🤣

UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

I'm really sorry man 😂😂 I really really am. I wanted to make Saeko his pair but we already made her his cousin. Takashi doesn't even get an harem. The only ladies with him now are Rei and Shizuka.

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

SHIZUKAAA!!!!!? You keep hurting me, man. I will NOT read Takeshi fondling those heaven-defying melons 😭 I can't NO NO NOOOOO!!!!! U R A MONSTERS!!!!

UrekSenpa1:I'm really sorry man 😂😂 I really really am. I wanted to make Saeko his pair but we already made her his cousin. Takashi doesn't even get an harem. The only ladies with him now are Rei and Shizuka.
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

😂😂💔 She's not stuck with him. But ik not spoiling anything 😂

TheLonelyGod:SHIZUKAAA!!!!!? You keep hurting me, man. I will NOT read Takeshi fondling those heaven-defying melons 😭 I can't NO NO NOOOOO!!!!! U R A MONSTERS!!!!
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Melshan
MelshanLv7

Dropped

Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

I'm also sad that komura can caress that heavenly melon, but on the bright side if you have your own (although not as big as shizuka's) 😂

TheLonelyGod:SHIZUKAAA!!!!!? You keep hurting me, man. I will NOT read Takeshi fondling those heaven-defying melons 😭 I can't NO NO NOOOOO!!!!! U R A MONSTERS!!!!
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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

I used to, but then I saw the flat was also justice🤣

Thehighesthol1:I'm also sad that komura can caress that heavenly melon, but on the bright side if you have your own (although not as big as shizuka's) 😂
OshinoAi
OshinoAiLv4

The love interest was an oc?😳 With so many girls in hotd?

Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

bruh moment

OshinoAi:The love interest was an oc?😳 With so many girls in hotd?
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OshinoAi
OshinoAiLv4

When i first saw this it has the cover of saeko busujima, so i thought it was a one-on-one romance with her, so when i found she was just a relative my reaction:

Whtvr:bruh moment
jax_0
jax_0Lv3

That's a harem

UrekSenpa1:I'm really sorry man 😂😂 I really really am. I wanted to make Saeko his pair but we already made her his cousin. Takashi doesn't even get an harem. The only ladies with him now are Rei and Shizuka.
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

i see

jax_0:That's a harem
DarkestCalling
DarkestCallingLv14

I'm really disappointed sakeo and shizuka are like the girls everyone loves in hotd also I'm just going to point out first cousin marriage is legal in Japan so sakeo was still a potential love interest disappointing for an oc on oc romance in fanfiction I vote small shizuka sakeo oc polyship just saying 😂😂

UrekSenpa1:I'm really sorry man 😂😂 I really really am. I wanted to make Saeko his pair but we already made her his cousin. Takashi doesn't even get an harem. The only ladies with him now are Rei and Shizuka.
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

Well, I made a promise to myself not to make Saeko a love interest. Shizuka? well probably...

DarkestCalling:I'm really disappointed sakeo and shizuka are like the girls everyone loves in hotd also I'm just going to point out first cousin marriage is legal in Japan so sakeo was still a potential love interest disappointing for an oc on oc romance in fanfiction I vote small shizuka sakeo oc polyship just saying 😂😂
DarkestCalling
DarkestCallingLv14

shizuka is just to hot and lovable they pulled off a good mixture of hot adorably ditzy cute sweet kind and ecchi lewd she easily fulfills the role of caregiver and heals your weary spirit from all the bs youd deal with in an apocalypse just by being herself and while not particularly a fighter she is at least not useless as a nurse I am disappointed in you and you should be too sakeo needs some love and affection from her self hate 😂😂

UrekSenpa1:Well, I made a promise to myself not to make Saeko a love interest. Shizuka? well probably...
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

Man's really heartbroken 🤧😂😂. She gets love from her cousin. Just not a romantic kind 😂.

DarkestCalling:shizuka is just to hot and lovable they pulled off a good mixture of hot adorably ditzy cute sweet kind and ecchi lewd she easily fulfills the role of caregiver and heals your weary spirit from all the bs youd deal with in an apocalypse just by being herself and while not particularly a fighter she is at least not useless as a nurse I am disappointed in you and you should be too sakeo needs some love and affection from her self hate 😂😂
DarkestCalling
DarkestCallingLv14

mm I see so she will turn into a unrequited yandere cousin-con 🤔🤔😂😂 jokes aside I do hope you open up to a polyship or harem idm oc/oc it just feels lackluster in most fanfiction outside of poly or harems cause fanfiction is usually already full of characters you know and love vs regular fiction

UrekSenpa1:Man's really heartbroken 🤧😂😂. She gets love from her cousin. Just not a romantic kind 😂.
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1Author

There's a billion harem fanfics out there 😂. I just wanted to be different and spread the love 🙂😂. Kohta needs love, Takashi already has love and Shiro does too. Love!!! Power of Love bruh 🤧😂.

DarkestCalling:mm I see so she will turn into a unrequited yandere cousin-con 🤔🤔😂😂 jokes aside I do hope you open up to a polyship or harem idm oc/oc it just feels lackluster in most fanfiction outside of poly or harems cause fanfiction is usually already full of characters you know and love vs regular fiction
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

That’s still a harem, idiot.

UrekSenpa1:I'm really sorry man 😂😂 I really really am. I wanted to make Saeko his pair but we already made her his cousin. Takashi doesn't even get an harem. The only ladies with him now are Rei and Shizuka.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

That’s even worse. Who wants used goods?

UrekSenpa1:😂😂💔 She's not stuck with him. But ik not spoiling anything 😂
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