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Fito
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2022-10-21 00:14

Well the novel has good ideas, the mc wins a system, the mc is clueless and cowardly sometimes but he is just a high school student, it would not be expected much at first that he would become a dominant alpha, this story seems more about survival, no it is known if the mc will settle somewhere and for the rest he does what the system tells him to do, so far it does not seem that the mc is a mastermind other than surviving day to day, the writing is decent.

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Well, thanks alot Fito. More chapters for you guys.

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