Review Detail of Pythia in My Life In Marvel

Item: My Life In Marvel
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PythiaLv21yrPythia

Needs very, Very, heavy editing in regards to dialogue and point of view...............................................................................

My Life In Marvel

TyrantTron335

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TyrantTron335AuteurTyrantTron335

it just that of author never tried use good grammar

1yr

skyhoundLv14skyhound

Agreed, the descriptions are ok but the dialogue needs heavy editing. Mainly on making it more comprehensible, clearing up the proper gender pronouns and clearly showing who's actually talking.

1yr

PythiaLv2Pythia

And making it reasonable manner of speech. As a native English speaker it makes me want to rip put my hair.

skyhound:Agreed, the descriptions are ok but the dialogue needs heavy editing. Mainly on making it more comprehensible, clearing up the proper gender pronouns and clearly showing who's actually talking.

1yr

Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

Is it you pope?

Pythia:And making it reasonable manner of speech. As a native English speaker it makes me want to rip put my hair.

1yr

MrIIIoLv5MrIIIo

did you actually translate it yourself or just put it through google translate?

TyrantTron335:it just that of author never tried use good grammar

1yr