Item: DC: Gunmetal
Rating: 4.2

UsedCreationLv142yr

2022-10-03 16:32

Can't really say much about it yet but I see lots of potential. Writing is good, your character is still getting fleshed out, and there's a lot more to come. It's looking to be really good to be honest. Although many people won't like his reveal of the system, but it seems like the best thing he could've done, plus a system in DC isn't even that far fetched.To the people who will say its a bad idea, there's Shazaam who's just a kid who can turn super powerful by saying a magic word. Then there's rings that can make you potentially make you the strongest person on a planet depending on your emotions. Really a system isn't a lot in DC, especially when it revolves around guns. Otherwise this is a good idea. Good Job my guy, keep up the good work

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