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Good start but the grammar is lacking you switched to past tence a few times in the middle of the story but overall great idea for a story based on the description

Saviors and destroyers: Reaching Godhood by Any Means Necessary

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Thanks for the kind rating. English isn't my first language and I'm taking online classes to improve it. Still a little rusty