little rough on the translations but i enjoyed the story, im all caught up and counting down the minits till a new chalter. thanks dor the good read

Good start but the grammar is lacking you switched to past tence a few times in the middle of the story but overall great idea for a story based on the description

good book im caught up in the chapters and the writing quality is very nice. overall great novel i cant tgink of anything else to say as i rarely leave reviews