I liked that the author didn't start with boring expatiation about the environment. It started with the action which I liked the most. Addressing the young lady as a butterfly is something unique and nice to read. However, the cover is not attractive enough so I would like to suggest the author make or find something more eye-catching as the Cover and synopsis are most for pulling readers attain to read a particular novel. besides the cover everything is fine. Good work author :)
Patricia_Levy
Liked it!
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