Patricia_Levy

Wow… This story started out normal then I got whiplash. Not bad, but wow… I really like the story of Simonand Periphae. It was very detailed and well done. I also like the characters. While Julianna seems to easily switch moods as much as her sister Lucy, she seems cool. Eric is very soft for someone who’s had a violent life. I’m hoping to see him become stronger in the chapters to come. Keep up the good work, Author!

This is the first book on WEBNOVEL I have ever finished. Which is saying something. Author, wonder story. You have given another version to the werewolf culture that I simply LOVE. I loved Tori and her feisty nature. I love that you kept her personality the same even to the end. I love Xavier and his need to protect her no matter what. I love the story behind everything that has happened to both of them. Truly, a wonderful story. I do reccomend going back and editing. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, beautiful work.

It was the students that were chanting that were scary. Not so much everything else. It just reminds me of other books. Plus, I could actually hear the voices in my head, which made it worse

I have finally updated the cover. What do you think?

First, I love the tradition the kids had. It’s sweet and shows a lot about them. Second, I like Nathan’s character. He seems to be a mostly confident man but is actually shy. It’s cute! The author does a really good job at writing and making things unique. I’ve only read the first chapter, and I feel it should have been longer. But that’a just my opinion. Great job!

I read the first chapter. While the story is interesting, the grammar needs a lot of work. Also, the author needs to remember she’ writing a book, not texting a message. Keep it up.s

This is a great story so far! Heemani is a name I haven’t heard before! I love interesting names! The author needs to work on grammar. There are a few run-on sentences that need to be shortened. Also, needs to work on quotes. Other than that, great job so far!

You have a huge run-on sentence. Try to break it up a little

I’ve only read the first chapter, but I love it so far. I love the way the author describes everything. I love the personality of the royals. The writing is exquisite, absolutely wonderful! I can’ wait to read more! t

First I love the cover! The story reminds me of Six of Crows. I like Ander. I think this is going to be a very complicated story, but it’ interesting! Just a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise awesome story so far!