Review Detail of Kw0z in Bandit in the Dead (The Walking Dead/Multiverse)
Détail de l’examen
Trash grammar, trash updating, trash story, trash progression, and trash character design. Couldn’t get through two chapters without dropping.
Bandit in the Dead (The Walking Dead/Multiverse)
Daoist_Cain
Aimé par 2 personnes
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I have seen all your comments in my fics, TBH when I was writing this fic I did not proofread it I just went along with what's on my mind atm. as for some of your complaints of trash grammar like I said I didn't proofread it I wrote along and update as soon as I think its enough. For the trash updating, I think I stated that this fic was just for me and to take my mind off when there are no uploads on the site I am reading or when I have nothing to read. As for the issues of trash progression I have no idea how you can see anything progress in 2 chapters but if you are capable of seeing it then I applaud you. And for the final issues that trash character design if I remember I haven't even introduced the main character in chapter 2 I only gave names and such. unless you have a future sight I have to give it to you I am beyond confused about where you are getting this info but since I have time I mind as well reply. I would like to think that you had a bad day and you just skim through my fic and decide to review it like an ancient human who just saw the first fire and decide to jump up and down but you don't have to worry I won't take down your review to set an entertainment for those who like to see clowns. hope you had a great day tomorrow.
Idk. I just base it off of how I write my fanfics, but even then, i’ll continue reading. This is just… difficult to continue reading
Daoist_Cain:I have seen all your comments in my fics, TBH when I was writing this fic I did not proofread it I just went along with what's on my mind atm. as for some of your complaints of trash grammar like I said I didn't proofread it I wrote along and update as soon as I think its enough. For the trash updating, I think I stated that this fic was just for me and to take my mind off when there are no uploads on the site I am reading or when I have nothing to read. As for the issues of trash progression I have no idea how you can see anything progress in 2 chapters but if you are capable of seeing it then I applaud you. And for the final issues that trash character design if I remember I haven't even introduced the main character in chapter 2 I only gave names and such. unless you have a future sight I have to give it to you I am beyond confused about where you are getting this info but since I have time I mind as well reply. I would like to think that you had a bad day and you just skim through my fic and decide to review it like an ancient human who just saw the first fire and decide to jump up and down but you don't have to worry I won't take down your review to set an entertainment for those who like to see clowns. hope you had a great day tomorrow.image