will clarify some things that may generate some doubts or misconceptions in this review (besides shamelessly giving me 5 stars). 1) It's the first time I write an original story, so the plot structure may seem messy sometimes (I'm not referring to the plot itself) but in how it generates rising action, I'm still learning but I'm constantly improving and I think that can be seen in more recent chapters. 2) My MC is a somewhat manipulative character and at first it may seem that he doesn't really love his harem like a second generation villain in a cultivation novel, but that's where the character development comes in, where I will also clarify something. Don't expect a super OP MC from the beginning, if so where would be the tension in his actions? 3) The lemons, yes there will be this type scenes, as you can see in the tag, but these will start by chapter 40+ being an approximation, it can be more or less. That would be basically all, if you have any other questions feel free to write in this review, I will answer as best I can.
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COMMEJoanjudo:Is this novel on hiatus, dropped or just updates really slowly cause I really like it but it hasn’t updated in a while.image
IAMBIGDADDY:Who reads webnovel for tension for action? most of people read web novel to enjoy and relax.
Empyrium:You probably should read the comments in your novel and answer some, some have suggestion, some noticed a mistake of yours, etc