Author here. So bassically, since my story just started off(Chapter 5 is when I wrote this), I ain't gonna give it a high rating. I will give it an accurate one though. Writing quality,..I'd say I'm a fairly good writer and that I rarely make mistakes. Story development,..I'd say its accurate. Not too fast and not too slow. Character design, does that mean how they look or how they're developed? Well, I'd say they look good, but as for writing, its ight. Tolerable characters atleast. Updating stability,..it's terrible. World background,..its terrible. And there you have it, an accurate review. Thanks for reading my story and have a nice day.
The_Auth0r
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COMMEHellDeimoS:I don't understand anything. If there is no second mc. Then who is Arthur? And why does he have his own harem???
Mc is far from gay I should probably say. Thought I made it clear, but i guess not. Anyways, there's not gonna be any sharing of women. They'll each get their own.
Gh0st00:i honestly don't like how mc interacts with Arthur. makes him seems more gay.. and the sharing things.. smh they both pervs idk why mc wanna share his woman in any form
The_Auth0r:Mc is far from gay I should probably say. Thought I made it clear, but i guess not. Anyways, there's not gonna be any sharing of women. They'll each get their own.
Sajat_Toyi:Wait, there are two main characters? Well, I'm out, who wants to read if the main character has two, it's a harem tag, then the main character has two, if the main character's harem story has only one
Share woman and a MHA world with gay scenes ? Thanks for the advise... yack man why don't author advise of the slight NTR or gay scenes... not everyone likes that
Gh0st00:i honestly don't like how mc interacts with Arthur. makes him seems more gay.. and the sharing things.. smh they both pervs idk why mc wanna share his woman in any form
The MC is not gay neither will he share his women. The author already confirmed this in above comments.
N0_Hope:Share woman and a MHA world with gay scenes ? Thanks for the advise... yack man why don't author advise of the slight NTR or gay scenes... not everyone likes that
Varun_Mohunah:The MC is not gay neither will he share his women. The author already confirmed this in above comments.
The_Auth0r:Mc is far from gay I should probably say. Thought I made it clear, but i guess not. Anyways, there's not gonna be any sharing of women. They'll each get their own.
The_Auth0r:Mc is far from gay I should probably say. Thought I made it clear, but i guess not. Anyways, there's not gonna be any sharing of women. They'll each get their own.
I don't understand anything. If there is no second mc. Then who is Arthur? And why does he have his own harem???
The_Auth0r:no
HellDeimoS:I don't understand anything. If there is no second mc. Then who is Arthur? And why does he have his own harem???
dont sell youselve short author, READ MY REVIEW, seriously i want to read more of your work, please share with me your discord i would like to have a chat with you, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR DONT LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE. I dont speak for motivation i speak the honest truth seriously one of the best novels i have read in a long while, if i had to compare it it would be the same level if not higher than avatar in dc, they both are neck on neck, they both captured the theme of the world they are in!!!! you guys dont know a good story when you see it and this one is literally smacking you on the face. This author is too humble, make a novel with a black mc next I definitely need a black mc novel that is as good as this if not better, if you ever make an original as good as this, just know i am your number one supporter. YOU CAN DO IT!
You’re too kind man. My story isnt all that to be honest. I don’t know how to make my characters stand out and so I feel like their stale. I do appreciate you tho, I really do. UndefinedLaw#0037
Master_Atlest:dont sell youselve short author, READ MY REVIEW, seriously i want to read more of your work, please share with me your discord i would like to have a chat with you, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR DONT LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE. I dont speak for motivation i speak the honest truth seriously one of the best novels i have read in a long while, if i had to compare it it would be the same level if not higher than avatar in dc, they both are neck on neck, they both captured the theme of the world they are in!!!! you guys dont know a good story when you see it and this one is literally smacking you on the face. This author is too humble, make a novel with a black mc next I definitely need a black mc novel that is as good as this if not better, if you ever make an original as good as this, just know i am your number one supporter. YOU CAN DO IT!image