Review Detail of Yoan_Roturier in --DELETED NOVEL--

The story is well written as far as I can tell. There are a few repetitive words and turns of phrases but you generally gloss over them if you don't pay attention to those. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, well balanced in general. Characters are interesting, my personal favorite is the Monitor (yeah not the MC). What I like the most though are the dialogues. They have a living feeling to them. Overall it's pretty good. For improvement, I would suggest more