Wow innovative world building, good English and nice starting plot. The only thing that left me confused is the weakness of the MC's mentality and lifestyle, you said he was ever kind with everyone but then he suddenly change his mind entirely just because he was murder? I felt like it was to sharp of a change and I know he had no choice since it was the only way he could live his second life but meh... I don't know it just feel wrong and a little forced. Anyway is interesting a soli 8,5 out of 10.
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