Review Detail of The_Sheep in The Solitude of the Time

Well, so far it's pretty good. There aren't many grammatical errors, the stability of the chapters is also good, I can't talk too much about characters and the story as it still only has 6 chapters, but it's progressing well. About World Background, apparently you decided to create an original background world, and it's quite interesting and original, apart from the obvious references. Keep it up!